Sunday, 27 November 2011

TM's Creative Writing

Today TM used his creativity to write a story about a funny picture that we looked at.  The picture is a little weird and a little funny.  Please enjoy reading TM's writing and let him know what he has done well by leaving a comment.


Once upon a time there was a long line to go to the toilet.  But the line was too long.  So they waited and waited.  But then two people came out so two more went into the toilet.  But then the people at the back got angry because the lines was too long so they left.
By TM
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4 comments:

  1. GB27 November 2011 at 21:05

    thats so funny TM!

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  2. Kimmy (Miss Panton's friend)28 November 2011 at 21:45

    Wow! That picture is so creative!!! Where did you get it from?!! ;o)

    Awesome story TM - I think I would leave too - if the line was too long for the toilet!!

    What would you do?

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  3. ns5 December 2011 at 23:37

    i really liked tks information its awsome.

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  4. ZT12 May 2012 at 05:06

    thats so cool 'n' funny!!

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